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The Doctor
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Ok it works like this...
I type part of a story in, and at the end give you three options of what happens next. Once someone has replied I will type the next part of the story in and we go till the story reaches a conclusion. I am gonna go with whoever chooses an option first to speed things up.
Part One
"Rose!"
Mass Panic! Chaos!
The Doctor was trying to reach rose who was the other side of a crowd of panicing people. They were screaming and shouting and all becuase of the TARDIS. There was a black light shooting out of it, and into the sky.
Rose pushed through and grabbed the Doctors hand
"Whats going on?!" She screamed
"No-Idea, but I'm gonna find out!" He grinned and ran to the TARDIS.
He was hitting things with a hammer and Rose was looking bemused. She stared up to the central column of the TARDIS and saw a face.
"Doctor...whats that....?" She said in a scared voice. He looked up to see a swirling black face.
"Well well well, if it isn't....."
Who's face has the Doctor and Rose seen?
A- The Master
B- The Black Gurdian
C- Davros
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kat
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the black gu(a)rdian
can we have an aside on who this is please?
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Deako
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Aww... I would of chosen the Master! 
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The Doctor
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Sorry for spelling mistakes. And i am aware this is a poor story!
The Black Gurdian first appeared in the ribos operation during tom bakers era. The Black Gurdian is desperate for the key to time, which the doctror is looking for. The Black Gurdian fails and the doctor collects the pieces. He next appears in Mawdryn Undead seeking revenge , and recruits the docs new assistant Turlough to kill the doctor. The Black Guardian has great power, but in Enlightenment, when turlough refuses to kill, The Black gurdian bursts into flames accepting defeat.
Now the Story!
The Black Gurdian stared down on The Doctor and Rose.
"Dn't worry rose, its a hollogram" said the doctor reasurringly. All of a sudden a beam of white light blinded the doctor and rose. A few seconds later they appeared in the middle of a forest, with the tardis nowhere to be seen.
"Where are we?!" Rose said in horror
"I'm not sur-" The Doctor replied before a someone intereupted him.
"Doctor! I have been watching you for many years now, and I have discovered your weaknesses and strenghts, and now i will use them to defeat you and take your TARDIS!" The Black gurdian boomed as the doctor and rose looked on. He disappeared again, and the doctor turned round again, looking someone in the eye. A person. Himself...
"Hello I'm the doctor! Oh and so are you." Number ten said. The sixth doctor did not replie and simply opened up his hand to reveal a gun.
"Auton!" Rose screamed wondering how it was so perfect in appearnce and walking...
Does The Doctor
A- Pin The Auton Down
B- RUN!
C- Use the sonci screwdriver to disable the weapon.
Doe Rose
A- RUN!
B- Help the doctor pin the auton down
C- throw her jacket over the auton to confuse it
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Deako
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The Doctor does C
Rose just legs it! (A)
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The Doctor
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"Run!" The Doctor yelled and for once rose did as she was told. He took out his sonci screwdriver and pointed it at the auton, just seconda before the gun went of. The Autons gun may have been disabled but he could still rip the docs head of! The Doctor ran away, towards rose
"Where is she! God, I'm being chased by Ronald McDonald! Wow, I'm even rude to myself, but god what was I thinking!" The Doctor said to himself forgetting the auton behind him. The Auton grabbed the doctor and pulled him back. And then it let go. He turned round to see rose who had wacked the auton down with a hammer she had grabbed out of the doctors pocket. And then it went black.
"Great just what we need!" The Doctor whined
"Whats happened?!" Rose enquired
"The Black Gurdian who i will tell you about later, controls everything. this is his world!" The Doctor said before hearing a faint scream. And then the lights came back on. Rose was being held by a monster. The Gurdian wanted him to see it...
What has grabbed Rose?
A- Cyberman
B- Black Gurdian Himself
C- Slitheen
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Deako
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Righty-o then, don't count this as a proper answer (I'll let someone else have a go)but I'd choose the Cyberman!
I don't have a clue what the Black Guardian looks like, for a start, and it may progress the story to a point in which where it comes to an immature end.
Slitheen are all well and good, but in honour of Season 2, I see the Cybermen as more fitting.
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The Doctor
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Well No-One else has voted so i will just take Deako's choice. Ok, I am still doing three choices but one of them will end the story. I have written the next three pieces in advance so two choices mean the story goes on, and one means it ends here.
Rose mumbled and the metal hand held over her face, and swung her hand backwards. The Cyberman fell onto the floor. What had happened?
"Are you ok?" The Doctor asked
"Yeah. but why did it collapse?"
"Let me see your hand" The Doctor said taking her hand and having a look "Gold ring, suffocates em! Well done Rose, but we better be of, bet there are more. I still wanna figure out why the autons had a copy of me"
Rose look confused "What? Oh never mind tell me later Where are we going?"
"Over...there" The Doctor pointed to a large black tower
"Why there?" Rose asked
"Because its tall black and dangerous!" They set of heading towards the tower. But they were being followed. More cybermen. They ran ahead.
"Up there into the tree!" The Doctor whispered hoping they hadn't found him and rose yet. They climbed up the into the tree and sat silently. Three cybemen walked underneath. Then the came back and started shaing the tree. Rose and The Doctor fell down, the sonic screwdriver skidding out of his pocket and away from him, onto the floor right in the middle of The Cybermen.
Whats Does The Doctor do?
A- Kick the cybermen from the floor and run
B- Throw a hamer at them
C- Make a dash for the sonci screwdriver.
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Deako
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Please, Gerry, do not take my answer for this one. I don't wanna get the blame for ending the story! -- Plus I've had too goes in a row. 
I, personnaly, would choose C.
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kat
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i choose c too
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The Doctor
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Well Kat, y dnt u right this bit 
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